Friday, May 14, 2010

I'd Touch You If I Could by Ms. Monroe & Ms. Cecile

My body is weak and shy but your closeness consumes my soul
Your body is strong and demanding but your soul devours my weakness and makes me whole

Seeking sweet release you dip your head kissing me so gentle
You make my core sing and to my hips you cling

The feel of your hands on my body makes me feel alive
But your kiss is what brings me out of my slumber


I wake to a chilled heart and bed it all feels so cold
Here's to another sad story that should've been left untold
The tears dried on my face
The rips in my heart from what was once


Memories are all I have of that night
that we once shared


Flashes of passion so high we were intoxicated
Glimpses of raw desire more potent than the strongest wiskey

They fade to black in my mind as I clutch the pillow next to me for once where you laid

Kiss her neck
Pull her hair

A deep moan of a building demands
Flickers of your obsession to a woman who is not me

Torment is my only companion
I will take the torture if it is the only way to hold on to you

My heart will forever be yours and yours mine
But not in the same way
and that pains me, but at the same time I will take what I can

Your smell is branded in my senses
Your face is etched in memory never to leave me

Your touch is as elusive as any mythical creatures
Never to be felt on my face the way it should be
for you will never belong to me


~Written by: Ms. Monroe & Ms. Cecile ~


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30 comments:

  1. Lovely story the both of you :)

    Have a great weekend Cecile. Poor little me, home all alone when bf is on a bachelor party tomorrow

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  2. Wow...I love it! You girls are amazing.

    ((hugs))

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  3. Beautiful ladies, just absolutely beautiful!!

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  4. Great story,you ladies did a great job.

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  5. Blodeuedd~
    Thanks! We really enjoyed writing together!

    Host~
    Thank you sweetie!

    Pattepoilue~
    Thanks for the warm compliment! =)
    *Kisses

    Leontine~
    Thanks darlin'!

    Elaing8~
    Thanks...it was our first time writing together and we are so happy it turned out like it did!

    Chris~
    ;) lol

    Sweet~
    Hey sugar pie! Thanks for being so sweet!

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  6. Blodeuedd! Hey honey! Thanks for coming over this Friday afternoon! Aww honey... Okay, I am coming over and we are having a girls weekend since BF will be away having fun with his buds!!!
    I'll keep you company!

    host!!!!!! Hey honey! How have you been?? School almost over right..?? I hope all is well honey! Thanks for stopping in!
    I hope you have a great weekend and get some much needed rest and you time!

    Caroline!!! Hey honey! Thanks for peeking in at our poem! Monroe is a trip to work with! I love her to pieces! She is a talented woman! I hope you have a great weekend honey! Did that headache every go away????

    Leontine!! Hey honey! Thanks for coming over to the Lair today! I hope all is well! Thank you for your kind words. It was a breeze working with this woman! I hope you have a great weekend!

    elaing8!! Hey honey! I am so glad that you made it here this morning!! I hope all is well! Thank you hon!

    Chris! Hey honey, thanks for coming over! :*

    Sweet! Hey hon!! Thank you!

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  7. Cecile,
    This is beautiful honey, great job! I love coming by your place, it really sets the mood for me. I like the lay out makes it easy to read, such beautiful words.
    Really busy right now but will come by again soon. Sorry it's taken me so long, just trying to finish things up around here.
    Love much girl
    Jes

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  8. Ms Monroe,
    Forgive me, I also think you did a great job with Cecile, didn't mean to leave you out...beautiful work ladies, keep it up you got all of us listening...can't wait to come back and see what you all did next.
    Blessed Be
    Jes

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  9. @Monroe *hugs*

    @Cecile Thank you it did go away in the end! I love these pills lol I hope yours went away too...i hate headaches you can't think properly.

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  10. Jes' Mystical Treasures!!! Hey sis!!!! Thank you for coming over. Girl you know I do care when you come over, as long as I know you are doing well... You can just pop over and not comment, Just to know you are well is good with me!!! Thank you for your kind words honey! You make blush!

    Cassidy Hunter! Hey honey!!!!! Thanks for coming over! Thank you for taking the time to read it! It is amazing what two people can do together... =)

    Caroline!! Hey honey! I am glad to hear that your headache did go away. Mine vanished when I got home and said we were cleaning house! Then my body started to scream, lmbo!! I hope you have an awesome weekend hon!

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  11. Ladies, that was fabulous! I'm looking forward to more collaborations between the two of you.

    Have a spectacular weekend!

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  12. Jess~
    No worries sweetheart! Thanks for the kind words!

    Cassidy~
    We really enjoyed writing this story for yall! Thanks!

    Pattepoilue~
    =)

    Eyre~
    We look forward to giving yall more...LOTS more! ;)

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  13. Hi Cecile and Monroe *waves* That was wonderful - very creative and emotional. I loved it!

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  14. Patti~
    Hey darlin' =) Thanks fro your kind words! Me and Cecile seem to make a good team!!! *Kisses

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  15. Powerful and beautiful great work ladies! :)

    Hope you both have a great weekend. HUGS

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  16. Eyre! Hey honey! Thanks for coming over! I am glad that you came and that you like the collaboration between the two of us. =)
    I hope you have a great weekend!

    Patti! Hey honey! Thanks for coming over! I am glad that you liked the piece. It was wonderful to work with Monroe! And there will be more to come!

    JennJ! Hey honey! Thanks for coming over this evening! It means a lot! I am glad that you enjoyed our work! Hugs to you honey and I hope you have a great weekend! I know I will talk with you before it is over, lmbo!

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  17. Hi Sweetie,

    I see I'm late as usual! I'm sorry.

    I love the heart felt story...the words are awesome and very touching...memories we've all had at one time or another...xoxoxo

    Hey Ms. Monroe...you're the icing on the sweet cake of Cecile! Great job on this post!

    Hugs to you both!
    Hawk

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  18. Phew, someone throw a bucket of cold water over this story, before my screen melts.

    Nice work Cecile/Ms Monroe.

    (Cecile - as for that other business, I think we ought to let it go. Maybe I'll just write a love story or something.)

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  19. Houston! Hey honey! I am so glad to see you come around today!!! I know how life can be honey! Girl, do not ever worry about being late to my place. You are family, family is never late!!!
    Thank you for your words about our story. Memories can be hell... but oh the pleasure of remembering those.... sigh!!
    I love your words, you make me giggle... I like the way you think!!! ->"Hey Ms. Monroe...you're the icing on the sweet cake of Cecile!"

    Mr V! Well, I am glad that you like the story. A bucket of cold water huh... Nah, I have another story that would make you need to stay under the cold shower... I will have to share it with you.
    Thank you for coming over Mr. V.
    Well, when you do write that story Mr. V, I will be sure to be there to read it!

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  20. I think most of us can say we have felt these feelings before..such true words, but with all good romance, we have it in our hearts and minds..there for... Cecile. Thank you hon, for such positive emotions of love and the dreams that rock our minds at sleep.
    I love what you have done and I love what you two have given, beautifully done...
    Cecile, I check in at Mr. Valance Porch and his heart is ok...he is hanging in alright..LOL
    Keep up the great work for my dreams are still in need.
    XO
    Jes

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  21. OK I'm confused Blodeuedd are you Ms Monroe? ROTFLOL Help!?? I didn't put the two together...damn computer world..I'm too old for this..can't keep up with all the names...
    Sorry
    Jes....I love this post and keep up the great work. You two work very well together.

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  22. Wow, touching poem, you girls! Thanks :)

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  23. Jes! Hey honey!! Hugs to you honey!!! I am hoping that all is going well over there!!!
    Aww honey, you are so kind with your words to me.
    Blodeuedd is a friend of mine from overseas Jes... Monroe is a friend here.. They are two different people hon. It is okay to be confused, I think I live like that most of the time! LOL!
    I am just glad that you came on over here!!! You know that means a lot to me... just to see you poke your head in and say hi!! Love ya honey!!

    Janna!! Hey honey!!! Thank you for coming by and leaving us with your kind words!

    Tracy! Hey honey!! I am glad that you liked it. It was a pleasure to write with Ms. Monroe!

    carolsnotebook! Hey honey! Thanks for coming on over today!! And I am glad that you liked it as well!

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  24. *Sorry Im so late on responding! lol I had a "duh" moment! ;)

    JennJ~
    Thanks hon!!! =)

    HAWK~
    Icing on Cecile…sounds yummy! ;) Thanks for the kind word sweetie!

    Valance~
    Lol hope to make your screen melt again! Thanks for stopping by!

    Jes~
    I think that’s what makes this story so real…weve all been there! Thanks!!! And ya…Im a newbie the great wheel of Smutty Hussy friends! ;)

    Janna~
    No thank you for the kind words! We aim to please!

    Tracy~
    Thank sweetheart! Hope youre doing well! =)

    Carolsnotebook~
    Glad you like the story! Theres more where this came from!

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I want to thank you for stopping by my place... I hope to see you again!!
I hope you enjoy my little bloggie home as much as I do!
With hugs, love and smiles... Cecile

My Fictional Smutty Boyfriend.... =)

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